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 From Beyond Open in new Window. [18+]
Michelina learns to trust her instincts and takes comfort in her ghostly presence.
by Purple Holiday Princess Author Icon
Review of From Beyond  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Purple Holiday Princess! This review is given on behalf of "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window..

*Reading* A good story. But one that is a bit sad also. Two lovers who just can't let each other go.

The Title and Description - A good title that works well with the story. The description confused me a bit, as I was expecting to read about a woman who was a ghost, and finally finds a way to accept it. I guess it's all how you read into it.

The Storyline/Plot - A tale of two lovers. One has died, but they still can't find it in their hearts to let go of each other. The one who dies, won't stay away from the one who is still living and he visits her dreams all of the time. The one living, won't let the one who died go and keeps calling him to her, begging him not to ever leave her. It's a tale of deep love, but also a sad one of not being able to let each other go, and move on.

The Characters - They're well-written and the reader is easily able to get to know both of their personalities.

The Setting - Excellent job writing the descriptions and details of the setting. It easily allows us to envision each scene as we read.

What I Liked Best - The true love that they both feel, and her being able to feel his energy in the end.

Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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