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Get me a Bucket or Blame it on Reno  [13+]
A vacationing Grandma's first trip to a Nevada casino can be a wild ride.
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
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Zoinks, what a tale *Rolling* You're quite lucky your mom didn't have any lasting effects from that attack of gambling exhilaration.

As someone who's never been to Reno and hopes I never do, I enjoyed the glimpse into a different world: dark, crowded, noisy, and blitzing with nickels! I have an addictive personality, at least it appears that way (sometimes I call it "loyalty...") And I don't think I could handle such madness.

This was clear, bright, fast-paced and hilarious. I'm going to have a difficult time getting reviewing characters for your items, because they're all quite good and I can't think of anything to suggest. An amusing story of a mother swept up in a world she'd never experienced before and a daughter trying to get her out of it - why, if you hadn't found her, she'd be there to this day!

You can add a third genre to make it easier to find when browsing. I would suggest "Experience" or "Personal." Perhaps "Regional" would do as well. Genres don't have to match perfectly.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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