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The Stroll  [ASR]
Even for Soul collectors, a mother's love is eternal!
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ
Review of The Stroll  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Greetings from the House of Mormont!
By participating in a Writing.com activity called "Game of Thrones" , I am in no way endorsing the GoT franchise or identifying as a fan thereof. I’m here to help my team win *Smile*
Your port raid begins, hon *BigSmile* I'll do it over a few days in combination with the 10 Tedious Task reviews for Joy. Not that it matters to you...

Goodness, what a surreal story. I wasn't sure what was going on, as one peculiar thing after another happened. It doesn't quite hold together... I mean, the beginning with the dwarf (is there some more PC medical term?) and the envelope of money doesn't have anything to do with the ending. I'm a little confused.

But I do understand the main point, that a mother wants to hold on for her children. I know I've considered that as a central theme of a thriller kind of story myself. It has a lot of potential.
Anyway, I'm reading this on my phone, so I don't know how you've formatted it. Presumably you're aware of the "size 4 Verdana font" mantra around here.

A spooky story that melds realism and fantasy in a way that reminds us of a great truth of life. I enjoyed reading it and I don't really have much to offer for suggestions.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *Heartg*

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