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Review #4745727
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Those Who Live in Grass Houses Open in new Window. [18+]
All the GoT stuff, 2024.
by Beholden Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Poor Old Hieronymus Bleeg" Open in new Window.
In affiliation with House of Sensual Prose  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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A "Game of Thrones"  Open in new Window. by Creeper Of The Realm Author Icon Review


Reviewing: Poor Old Hieronymus Bleeg
Hieronymus lives in a galaxy, considered the backwoods of Arphitrite, a remote planet. They are not used to getting deliveries, so when a delivery man shows up looking for him, and he cannot recollect ordering anything, he lies and pretends that Hieronymus isn't home. The delivery man makes a deal to get him to sign for the package and he'll leave it. Once the large box is inside his home, he is curious but studies it, looking for clues before he finally opens it. One box, inside another, and then, a naked, silver woman appears. She's a robot that has the ability to carry on conversations, yet her main task is to clean.


Spelling/Grammar/Issues:
Rita put it on-- Angela?

Description/emotion: Good reactions from Hieronymus as she discovers Angela, him being uncomfortable with her nakedness, and happiness at having someone to talk with and get his home in order.

Overall: The backstory of how Angela was invented was creative and scary, I must admit. With all of the AI stuff happening now, you never know if this is the direction we are headed in the future. It was nice that Hieronymus had a companion of sorts and that he made a connection with Angela, wanting to hurt someone for how her previous life linked to her robotic one.




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