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 Memento Mori Open in new Window. [13+]
Brotherly love of money. Writer's Cramp entry for 1/28/2022.
by Jeff Author Icon
Review of Memento Mori  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Jeff! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* Well no one truly wins, do they? So much for fatherly love. *Pthb* Great story that's well-written, creative, and imaginative. Nice job.

The Title and Description - Great title. It's a perfect fit for the story. A good description that urged me to read on!

The Storyline/Plot - Brothers are challenged against each other by their father all throughout their lives. Why did they expect that to change just because he died? The last challenge he left for them, is the cruelest of them all,

The Characters - The brothers, the deceased father, who is still very much present, and the lawyer. One brother was always better at the challenges than the other. Though, he would say it's not that he's better, just that he learned to strategize. Will they go through with their father's last challenge, or will they put it behind them, and let the challenges die with their father?

The Setting - You did a wonderful job with the descriptions and details. The reader is easily able to envision each scene as we read. Well done.

What I Liked Best - Finding out the father's last challenge and the ending.

Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it.

*Heart* Tracey



"When you play the game of thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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