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| (1.0)   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello, Maryann   An "Anniversary Reviews" gift for you!  Happy 22nd to you! I'm here for my yearly dose of a one star poem of yours, and I think I tell you every year, "I think this is the worst poem I've ever read."  I thought it was brilliant to start the first line off with a phrase that it familiar and then it takes a nose dive after that. It takes talent to write something bad on purpose and with this one, it's done to perfection! The first stanza sets the tone for the whole poem -- like from bad to worse, but I have to say the last line of this stanza made me laugh out loud. Even though it's bad. you set things in motion with the finger that is cut. You then take that 'phrasing' and run with it. I thought the third stanza was so random, which also is good for a laugh. I'm glad you have it under the genre of Comedy, but if you ever decide to edit it, consider replacing 'Contest' with maybe 'Food/Cooking'.  It's funny how a poem about a cut finger somehow worked into chocolate! You also tossed in commas in random spots so the poem would read awkward. To end it off the same way as it started brought it around full-circle -- so bad, and you definitely deserve the one star rating for this one bigtime. You're so talented with this type of poetry. You should write it more often so I can keep reviewing one every year. Enjoy your anniversary!  Lornda My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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