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My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: A House in Cornwall

First Impression: When Devon sees Cornwall he immediately bought a house of stone, with trout passing through, and it was exactly what you wanted. (Around willows and has a view of Moors.) Bought it with an upside down view of the Moors, and you said you would be happy. The speaker has never lived there, and it was exactly what you wanted. The speaker has view of the mountains, specifically the Rockies in Colorado, and it was exactly what the speaker wanted.

There is this beautiful view of a house in Cornwall which the speaker didn't go to. Just described it as if viewing it from a picture in a brochure or something. The other person wanted it. Then it goes on to say the house was bought by the two of them and it had an upside down view of the Moors. The other person would be happy there. The speaker has never lived in the house of Cornwall. Just what the other person wanted. The speaker lives in Colorado where the mountains are in reach. Just the way the speaker wanted. Sounds like the speaker and the other person has two different views on where to live. The other person wanted Cornwall and the speaker in Colorado.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: The description of the house in Cornwall as well as the mountains in Colorado. Both sound like beautiful places. I know from experience Colorado would be too cold for me. I don't know about Cornwall. Maybe same thing.

Overall impression: Great details. In few words, you describe what sounds like a dream house. Living in two different places wouldn't work out very well in the long run. I love the way the poem runs. Freely flowing. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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