Wow JCosmos! I enjoyed the vast amount of information you provided at the bottom of your poem equally as much as the delightful poem itself. Some days I feel that I actually learned something new.
You can take the credit for me learning what a Coy Dog is. I truly never heard of it before. Maybe it's because, I don't think, we have those on the east coast where I live.

I was attracted to your item because I love dogs and I thought your poem story was about shy dogs. How funny is that! Anyway, now I know something new.

You did add the prompt words nicely. I thought they were well-placed, and they told a believable story. When I read those lines, I felt that you described a beautiful symphony gala. How fancy everyone must have looked, wearing tuxedos, top hats, and red cocktail dresses. These descriptions made it seem like a beautiful event.

You did a great job with showing concern that the guy felt about going to the event, while leaving his chickens unattended at the rural farmhouse. I would have been worried, too, if I knew there were out of control coy dogs running around. Oh gosh, and there were mountain lions, too! Your poem had a disturbingly realistic feel to it!

Mr. Chuckmiester added a bit of humor to your story poem.

I liked the fun fact that told of how the Sobrante area where your story took place, had been inhabited by the Huichin, an Oh lone tribe, between 5000 and 1000 BC., and that one of their villages stood where the El Sobrante Library now stands.

Important: Please change the rating of your item. You have it at E, but with the mention of drugs and weapons, of course, it should be a higher rating. Thanks!

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