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My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Jewel Thief

First Impression: Things are going by ordinary except that a Monk passed by. Then at home a police came and asked questions. Lawyers were called and everything, but efforts were futile when the trial came because the youngest was the jewel thief. Death was the sentence, but he escaped and lived to see another day.

Trivial, things were going so smoothly or so it seemed as if it was a normal day until the police came. The speaker didn't believe their young sibling could be the jewel thief so helped put together lawyers and everything to discount that theory. But when the time came it turned out he had stolen from the king and queens as well as a few more people, including the judge. That theory went down the drain as evidence proved he was the jewel thief. Good hiding it until the last minute. Unfortunately, or fortunately, he escaped the place to live to see another day. So now what would the speaker feel knowing he was a jewel thief on the loose? Excited, mad, shocked? Still, probably not going to welcome little brother into the house for fear of stolen jewels hidden in the house.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: The fight to prove the little brother innocent, he couldn't really be the jewel thief. Until the evidence proved otherwise. Still, he's the character's little brother.

Overall impression: I enjoyed reading this story. The characters are believable and the details are just right. The jewel thief ended up getting away after all, living to see another day. But is wanted for being a thief by the court. Probably would avoid going home because that's where the police would look for him. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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