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I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"Turn From Here" is a deceptively simple poem that packs a powerful emotional punch. It paints a vivid picture of isolation's impact on a lighthouse keeper and his wife, juxtaposed with the sudden horror of a maritime accident.

The poem establishes a melancholic tone from the outset. The first stanza introduces the couple, content in their routine yet hinting at the underlying loneliness of their secluded life with the line "sometimes their loneliness grew." This subtle foreshadowing prepares the reader for the potential dangers of their isolated existence.

The central conflict unfolds with the arrival of a ship. The poem cleverly uses repetition with "Don't come any closer, turn from here" to emphasize the lighthouse's critical warning. The deliberate shift to a dark, foggy night creates a sense of foreboding as the doomed ship struggles against the very light meant to guide it.

The imagery in the subsequent stanza is strong and visceral. The captain's desperate effort at the wheel is a testament to his fight for survival, tragically contrasted with the horrific impact of the crash described with "bow came crashing hard on the rocks" and "stern followed torn apart on the docks." The use of nautical terms like "bow" and "stern" adds a touch of authenticity, grounding the reader in the perilous reality of the situation.

The poem takes a shocking turn as the wife discovers a survivor with a critical, unexpected injury. This detail disrupts the reader's expectations and deepens the tragedy. The wife's helplessness in the face of the man's gruesome injuries adds another layer of emotional weight, highlighting the limitations of human intervention against the harsh power of nature.

The ending powerfully reinforces the theme of loss. The single line "The ocean had claimed all and left her undone" serves as a strong closing statement. It conveys the wife's utter devastation in the face of the overwhelming loss – not just of the lives claimed by the sea, but also the shattering of any hope for rescue or solace. The poem's final image leaves a lasting impression, a testament to the enduring power of isolation and the unforgiving nature of the sea.

Overall, "Turn From Here" is a well-crafted poem that uses simple language to create a complex and moving story. The use of imagery, foreshadowing, and a surprising twist effectively draws the reader into the scene, while the tragic ending lingers long after the final line. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!


Best regards,
Gervic