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I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


This poem, "For My Daughter," offers a touching window into the complexities of a parent's love. While the language is straightforward and accessible, the emotional depth resonates clearly. The poem's strength lies in its relatable details that capture universal experiences of parenthood.

The opening lines create a powerful image with "When I first saw you / I held you in my arms." This simple yet evocative description conveys the awe and wonder of meeting a child for the first time. The second stanza reinforces this feeling of new-parent wonder by focusing on the child's delicate features, "I couldn't believe, / how small your hands and feet were." These specific details personalize the poem and allow readers to connect with the parent's emotions.

The poem progresses by acknowledging the realities of parenthood. The third stanza takes a turn, introducing the challenges with "You have always brightened / my days / but you drove me crazy at / the same time." This honest portrayal adds a layer of authenticity that many parents will recognize. It acknowledges the difficulties of raising a child while still cherishing the joys.

The final stanza brings the poem to a close by emphasizing the enduring nature of parental love. The lines "I will always be there for you / if you ever need me" and "I will always love you / with all my heart" offer a powerful reassurance of the parent's unwavering devotion. The closing line referencing faith in God provides comfort and adds a spiritual dimension, suggesting a higher power watching over the child.

In conclusion, despite its brevity and use of plain language, "For My Daughter" effectively conveys the powerful emotions of parental love. The poem's relatable details and honest portrayal of the challenges and joys of parenthood create a lasting impression. It's a proof to the enduring bond between parent and child. Thank you for the heart-warming read. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic