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I enjoyed reading your poem. It's an interesting piece that didn't go the direction I was expecting it to go based on the title. That didn't take anything away from the poem. You subverted expectations very well. The rhyme scheme is well utilized and consistent throughout the stanzas. The entire piece flows very well with no hiccups. It’s certainly a different take on the word mutiny. Using mutiny to express failing health makes a lot of sense and helps tie the stanzas and the poem as a whole together. The subject of failing health is made clear in each stanza, as each organ joins the mutiny. It's a subject that many readers can relate to. The poem is a good length, not being too long or too short. It uses that length well without feeling like it's dragging on too long or like it doesn't have enough space.

I particularly enjoyed how you use a different organ in each stanza, which helps express the poem's theme. I also enjoyed that you put a way to see the definition on the word “Hale” in the poem. This adds to the poem’s consistency. The poem also contains a good amount of description, without going overboard. It allows the piece to get the point across without bogging it down. There were no spelling or punctuation errors. The piece as a whole is readable and easily understandable, which keeps the readers from getting confused.

Overall, this is a well-written, interesting poem with a consistent theme, a well-executed rhyme scheme, and a different take on a concept. Very well-done. Keep up the good work. Write on.