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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.Title: The Heart of a Writerfirst Impression: You sure love words, don't you? You praise, worship and exalt them in all their glory. You paint and sculpture with them thereby acknowledging words create art. You present strong imagery here. What needs your attention: "My own minds' movie reel." I believe that the apostrophe should be placed between the letter 'd' and the letter's'. You are expressing ownership there. What part I liked best: You believe writers to be runners, marathoners " on the track of prose, imagination and passion." This is a fitting analogy. We expel energy in our effort to combine the perfect blend of words to best portray our stories. And I like the idea, the possibility of checkpoints at which we check in and evaluate our progress. It can, at times, be an exhausting endeavour. And, yes, it is not a typical competition with someone crossing the finish line first. We strive to finish no matter the time taken to do so. Thank you for the final inspiring line. I agree with you about plot lines, or characters sacrificed for a movie. The original story as presented in a book is often totally different when transformed to film. As is said, something is lost in the translation. Yes, writing can be compared to "mental aerobics." Our writers' minds are always flipping, tumbling, dancing and leaping. We are indeed busy. One of the pleasures of WDC is stopping to peruse and review the writings of other like-minded individuals.Overall Impression: This is a positive, uplifting portrayal of the active process of writing. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say? Listen carefully. (1843 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein.This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.