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I enjoyed your short article very much. It's very well-written, easily understandable and educational. It contains quite a bit of information for being as short as it is. I learned some new things about onions that I didn't know before. The information was conveyed in a clear and concise manner that allows the reader to follow along without getting confused. The article is straight forward with its subject of natural cough relief.

I particularly liked the fact that the article was separated into sections, which aids in the readability of the article. Throughout the piece, it gives simple explanations for why onions work for helping with coughs, how honey and lemon can assist and enhance the effects and what to avoid and why and it does this while using words that the readers will understand. At no point does the article treat its readers like they're stupid,

There are no errors in terms of punctuation or spelling that I could find. The only suggestions I have would be to bold the section headings and to expand the sections themselves with more information. Expanding the article with more information could give readers a better understanding of the subject. Though the length doesn't take away from the information already present, getting straight to the point without any fluff.

Overall, you've done a good job conveying the information here to your audience, making this is a well-written, understandable article with some good information that will hopefully help anyone dealing with an annoying cough.