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You have a woman that's concerned about her daughter's online activities, and thus decided to snoop on her, only to find out that she's talking to a lot of strange men. As a result, mother has decided to teach her daughter a lesson by creating a fake account to, basically, catfish her daughter. Will this plan work, or will it backfire?

Characters
The characters seem interesting, though I do have to wonder.... how old is the daughter? That could make things more serious, or dangerous.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but in the "Chat" sections, might be a good idea to use some slang/ shorthand types of writing, so as to convey the "theme" of being in a chat room or whatever. Heck, toss in a few of the more commonly misspelled words, as it were, with the "correct" misspellings.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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