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 REASON WHY I SING--award winner Open in new Window. [E]
I sing to heal my soul, trying to become whole.
by Dr M C Gupta Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A "Game of Thrones"  Open in new Window. by Gaby Author Icon Review

Subject: You wrote a solid poem about singing and how it affects you. I liked your comparison of singing and your imagination. So many sing alone for various reasons, but you spelled yours out with concrete reasons for doing so.

Flow: This moved well from one stanza to the next, an unfolding story of what singing means and how it makes you feel. The abcb format worked well.

Description/emotion: I believe that everyone is self-conscious about something. For you, it's singing in front of others, which is also because you see your lyrics as wrong, yet comfort your soul. Great imagery in those lines. There is nothing wrong with being aware, but I wanted to know if I missed why you thought the lyrics were poor.

Overall Impression: I discovered your writing on the random review page. Finding light while you're struggling is key, and you found yours in music, for it is comforting for you like a warm blanket is for others. It is a little escape from whatever agony you are experiencing. Not only are you singing, but writing the lyrics as well. Impressive. If this is a take on your life, then I truly hope that you find the alleviation you are looking for.






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