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 | Bubba's Corner BBQ - Entry 4-12-24  [E] A local provides directions and assistance to get to Bubba's BBQ.  |
| (4.0)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Bubba's Corner BBQ - Entry 4-12-24 " from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMGetting to Bubba's Corner BBQ isn't easy - especially if it's not on a corner.  WHAT I LIKEDI loved the ending and the explanation why Bubba's Corner BBQ wasn't on a corner. Heck, I wouldn't want to be on a corner if I was usin' my own brew, too!  STRUCTUREThis is a free from poem with a AABBCC rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Soon, turn at the old brown stump with the dead skunk hangin' high," I was laughing at that visual an old brown stump and a dead skunk haning' high over the stump. It's nasty funny. The author did a great a job following the prompt and not using directional words. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader. If anything, it's always a challenge to use a dialect because you want to be authentic, but at the same time, it can be hard to understand. I appreciated the fact that the tone was very authentic to the prompt, but I had to slow down and re-read to really get it. Give and take, I suppose. Overall, the poem is a hoot and lives up to the comedy genre. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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You responded to this review 04/12/2024 @ 5:04pm EDT