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Creating Motion in Fiction ![]() How to apply show don't tell principle and adjust the pace of the story ![]() |
A "Game of Thrones" ![]() ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello Joy ![]() First impression: Items that help with writing are always something I am interested in reading. I am glad that you have created this document and make it available to the community in your "Items on the Craft of Writing " ![]() What works: Great job presenting several examples of show don't tell that cover a host of different scenes and how to make them more lively. What needs work: It's been a theme recently, but it bears repeating. It could be a good idea to increase the font size to 3.5 or 4.0. The reader of today, because he is so strongly conditioned by the movies ![]() To start with, the show, don't tell principle has to be at work here ![]() Final thoughts: I think your suggestion to circle all of the adjectives and adverbs is a good one. ![]() ![]()
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