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Greetings!  [E]
C-notes to send to a friend.
by Legerdemain
Review of Greetings!  
Review by Jayne
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, Legerdemain!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
I love this Cnote shop's wide variety of images.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
The description is clear and tells the reader exactly what the shop is for. Technically, there's nothing wrong with the title, either, since they are greetings. I don't have a Cnote shop, so I don't know if it affects the search function at all. If it does, I'd probably swap it out for "Cnote Greetings!"

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
It's hard not to compare this particular Cnote shop to your much larger endeavor! That isn't to say this shop is bad, because it isn't. It holds its own just fine. If I think it through, linking just this one shop directly from the port is probably helpful for customers who don't want to search around or aren't interested in the other products you offer.

In your shop folder, you have a concise description: "Cnotes to send to a friend." I'm a fan of keeping those sections as small and clean as possible, but it may be a bit too small in this case. I saw in another member's shop a mention of animated Cnotes being able to be sent and received by any case color. I don't want to force you into a box of "be the same as everyone else," but having that information listed up front might be helpful. If that statement is wrong, please let me know! I don't want to be passing around incorrect information.

There are some great offerings in this shop, and I'm particularly fond of the animated Cnotes and the Creative Comments notes. It's great that you offer notes for both blue case and yellow case promotions. I've only seen that once before on the site. The creative ones gave me quite a chuckle—especially the one about missing three periods.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I didn't find any problems in the shop or the notes.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
I'm unsure how you manage so many angles of Cnote and other member accessories, but it is impressive! I tip my hat to your organization and dedication.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayne *Smile*


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