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 The Great Ship  Open in new Window. [18+]
The final minutes on the Titanic, and they did their best.
by Winchester Jones Author Icon
Review of The Great Ship  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Winchester Jones! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window..

*Reading* Nice job with the Writer's Cramp Prompt. The last little bit of time before the ship goes down. I like the different experiences with multiple people. Good job.

The famous violinists are getting ready to play their last tunes for the passengers.
They know it will be the last thing they ever play. They want to go out doing what they love, soothing the passengers, and praising God with their music.

There is the young lovers who know the end is near. They choose to stay in bed together.

And there is the group of old men at the table, getting high with the steward.

Title and Description - The title fits nicely, and the description of the story made me want to read on.

You have two good genre categories. You may want to delete contest entry and add another genre, maybe: Drama, or Action/Adventure. Many people find items to read by typing in the wanted genre in the search bar. Contest Entry isn't going to bring you any extra readers.

Characters - Your story has groups of different characters that are well-written. We get to know different personality aspects of a few of them. It adds good detail to the story. Their emotion comes through nicely.

Setting - You do a great job with the setting. It was easy for me to envision each scene as I read.

What I Liked Best - I like the whole scene of the group of men sitting at the table. It's poignant but funny. It's well written with a lot of detail and description that makes it a pleasure to read.


Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed it.

*Quill* WRITE ON! *Quill*

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"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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