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BLUE BOOKCASE Open in new Window. [E]
True caring lasts a lifetime. Written for senior mods' contest.
by Joy Author Icon
Review of BLUE BOOKCASE  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* This is a beautiful story of a Granduncle and a child's deep love for one another. When the child's father died, her Granduncle took the role, to the point of even defending her in some of her actions. Those that her mom was not too pleased with.

It was nice for her Granduncle to step up to the plate, and be that all-important support and unconditional love from a father figure that all kids need.

One day, her Granduncle has a heart attack and crosses to the other side. He is brought back because he says he has a promise to keep. When he's recovering, he takes away the child's fears, as well as the aunt's fear of dying, when he tells them how beautiful, welcoming, and loving Heaven is.

The relationship between all of the characters is well-written. It's a biographical story that sends a warm feeling and smile to the reader's heart and face.

A relationship like this in a child's life is a blessing. I'm so glad he was in your life. *Heart*

Below are a few suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit.

*Books2* At the end,

In the end,

*Penp* purchase of such

the purchase of such

*Notepady* bedside several hours

bedside for several hours

*Pencil* recovery period Granduncle

Comma after period

Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed your story.

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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