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 Secrets of the Coconut Cove Lounge Open in new Window. [13+]
Three men discuss something hidden at the Coconut Cove Lounge, then go looking for it.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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This has a 20's gangster feel to it, even with the names created, and "snuffing" out their smokes' Neat name for a lounge. Interesting and short. I could the three men in suits, in a cloud of smoke, talking in their accents, the annoyance and doubt showing in their voices.
Old office, found very quick. Is there a second part? It'd be neat if there was so kind of trap they didn't know about. Or maybe the ghost of Mickey gets angry they took his stash? This could go many different directions. I enjoyed it and glad I came across it for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.. I should read more mysteries I had fun.

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