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To Robin Williams Open in new Window. [13+]
In Memory of Robin Williams
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hallo Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon!*Smile*
I will be reviewing your work "To Robin Williams" Open in new Window. on behalf of "House Targaryen Points" Open in new Window. for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

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A loving tribute to the late great actor, Robin Williams.

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I think my very first introduction to Robin Williams was as his role in the classic movie Mrs. Doubtfire. I don't think I've ever laughed so hard while watching a movie before, and I was so curious to know more about him, I ended up watching a few more of his works which included Captain Hook (that fun take on Peter Pan), Dead Poets Society (got the chills at that end scene with the infamous 'Captain, My Captain!), Jumanji (the greatest one - no offense to those who are fans of the newer versions), and how can we forget his voice as the genie in Aladdin?

From these alone, it's clear Robin was ingrained into many lives and I'm sure he must have changed quite a few while alive. So, hearing about his death was quite a shock - and learning the stories behind who he really was - made it even more somber.

For your poem, as short and simple as it is, you manage to encapsulate why so many of us loved him so much. The rhyming scheme is straightforward and easy to read, and the line about choosing the night of his passing as the one with the super moon, is so very poignant.

Now, I'm curious as to what made you a fan of him, and how he influenced you as well; seeing as you are one of the queens of comedy around Writing.com. *Wink*

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Here are a few things I noticed while reading. Please remember that these are only my suggestions/opinions and it's ultimately up to you to choose what works best. *Smile*

There are no suggestions that come to mind as this is a fitting tribute to a legend.

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Thanks for sharing this piece with us, and keep on writing! *Bigsmile*

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