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 Before the Winter Open in new Window. [E]
A short little poem about love and the seasons.
by James (Himura) Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet essence of love and longing, framed within the changing seasons and the passage of time. The imagery of summer turning to winter and dreams turning to snow evokes a sense of inevitability and transience, highlighting the fleeting nature of moments cherished with loved ones.

The repetition of the phrase before the summer reinforces the urgency of the speaker's promise to return, underscoring their commitment to their beloved despite the physical distance between them. The mention of yellow leaves falling symbolizes both the beauty of autumn and the impending separation, adding a poignant layer of emotion to the poem.

The speaker's vow to return before the next summer infuses the poem with hope and anticipation, suggesting a resilient determination to overcome obstacles and reunite with their loved one. The imagery of the winter breeze carrying the speaker's message serves as a comforting reassurance, bridging the gap between their physical absence and emotional presence.

The poem's closing lines convey a sense of solidarity and companionship, as the speaker promises to walk the road of life together with their beloved, sharing in the realization of shared dreams and aspirations. The sentiment that all the dreams are true, if you only let 'em be before the winter shows the transformative power of love and the importance of seizing the present moment to pursue one's desires.

Overall, you’ve crafted a wonderful poem that is a poignant ode to love, resilience, and the enduring promise of reunion. Through its evocative imagery and heartfelt sentiments, it captures the essence of longing and hope, offering solace in the face of separation and a reminder of the enduring strength of connection. Thank you for sharing this with us! Write on!

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