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 To whom it may concern Open in new Window. [E]
a peom about my ememies
by Mistress K Author Icon
Review by Krista Kringle Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This poem is about judgment, criticism, and self-worth in a with a raw and introspective tone. The repetition of the phrase To whom are you creates a rhythmic structure that emphasizes each question, demanding accountability from the unnamed subject of the speaker's scrutiny.

The poem begins by questioning the authority of the individual who presumes to judge or mislead the speaker, expressing defiance against those who wish to undermine their dreams and aspirations. The repetition of the phrase To whom are you serves as a rhetorical device, challenging the legitimacy of the critic's actions and motivations.

As the poem progresses, the speaker confronts various forms of negativity and hostility, including schadenfreude at their failures, ridicule at their setbacks, and gossip about their struggles. This portrayal of adversity underscores the speaker's resilience in the face of adversity, refusing to be defined by others' perceptions or expectations.

The poem culminates in a poignant reflection on the nature of perfection and imperfection, questioning whether the critic is really faultless or free from problems themselves. This introspective turn invites readers to consider the hypocrisy inherent in judging others while overlooking one's own flaws.

Overall, you’ve crafted a candid exploration of judgment and criticism. It encourages empathy, self-reflection, and the recognition of individual dignity, which can be forgotten. Thank you for sharing this with us! Write on!

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