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Good Morning ifunanya001 Welcome to WDC.

Little me always enjoys a small spooky take, and this is no exception. The ending kind of loses steam but the imagery is rich and very moody. A classic troupe to the eerie abandoned house and all it's mystery and fear.
Suggestions.
How did Sarah deluge into the family mysteries?
Why would she got alone. Yeah I know you state she was fan of superstition but the house being legend in the town, and shunned, I find it strange she'd go alone.
What year was the house build? To give reference to the ghosts siting around the table.

To express so much dread around the house and it's stature in the town, I have questions. This kind of me of The Haunting of Hill House. I hope my review was helpful, and again Thanks!

StaiNed-:D


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