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 Checkmate Open in new Window. [13+]
The late summer night when Mrs. Richards lost the last chess game of her life
by Josh T. Alto Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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An interesting story we have here, with the two separate perspectives set off in alternating italics. I thought it was quite interesting, but it wasn’t exactly a mystery so much as a paranormal genre type. The use of the chess theme was a thoughtful technique; I’ve always liked chess. You have portrayed Mrs Richards sympathetically, and we don’t feel particularly disgusted at her actions, nor distressed by the ultimate outcome, though it’s understood that the last years of her life that should have been a release were actually a torment because of what she had done. The elements are set out well, with the checkmate and the missing piece, and your descriptions of the scenery are visually appealing.

In formatting, a word count in the subtitle or right at the top of the item would be useful in determining whether one has enough time to read and review in one sitting. I always recommend size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and accessibility across devices. Other than that, the story is quiet and easily understood, and I enjoyed it and have nothing to suggest by way of correction. Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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