Eternal Life [ASR] Written for the "Share Your Faith" activity |
Hello NaNotatoGo! I'm sending this review in connection with "I Write in 2024" . Positives Thanks for sharing your faith with us! I'm only tangentially familiar with the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints, so it was really interesting to get to know a little more specifics about your particular expression of faith and how it compares to some others (e.g., non-denominational Christians, Catholics, etc.). You did a great job of breaking down the different types of afterlife one can look forward to (or not) based on your faith tradition. Suggestions While the first half of the piece felt really well-organized and well-presented, the second half of the item felt a little scattered. There were only brief comments on the concepts of "loopholes" to your religious tradition's rules, a quick reference to your own experience with reproductive health struggles and not knowing what that means for your faith, and that the concept of "Hell" in your faith tradition is not the same thing as what others believe. Each of these feel like "big" topics that could have used a little more explanation to fully give the reader context for what's so different about your religion. Overall Overall, I enjoyed reading this item and thought you did a good job responding to the prompt. Nice work! I hope you've found this review helpful. If so, please consider paying it forward by reviewing the work of another WDC author! Respectfully, Jeff "Rating & Reviewing Philosophy" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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