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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Reflections Revealed

Hi Webwitch: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: Autumn beauty. Life cycles. I like poems about nature. Nature is so serene and relaxing. I thought I would look this over and give my observations. I like to read items that make me smile and think good thoughts. I am ready to review.

What needs your attention: Autumn wasn't mentioned in the body of the poem just in the description describing the poem but it didn't take way from the lovely expressions in this poem.

What part I liked best: Thine wonders gifted from above. There is an urgent flee of birds taking delight in their flight. A banquet of clarity. Symbiotic sensation. Currents striped ripples. The viewer knows not what scene is more perfect. These are some good lines. Lovely reflections. They blend into the poem real well.

Overall Impression: A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. A good scenario. Some well chosen words balance this out. The birds shall return. Creative and colorful. This describes an artist's painting as well as nature in the autumn. A good presentation.


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