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This poem was hilarious! I read it out loud to my kids and they were cracking up. If you don't win, there's something wrong. *Laugh*

Only nitpick is good and food don't reeeeally rhyme. It's something my kids caught, too. If you have time to tweak, maybe change it to something like, "Listen, you sourpuss: don't be rude/I know a bear who is looking for food." ?? Just an idea. *Wink*


Good luck tomorrow!
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