Hi Sum1's Home ;

I'm 💙 Carly-wrimo 2024 and I found your poem when I clicked on the read and review link on the side of my WDC page. I like the randomness of the picks... and the extra gift points is a sweet treat as well.

I really enjoyed this poem. It told a story that is lovely and heartwarming. Feeding the masses of those in need when your family is late in coming and when they do finally make it they add their own food and continue to share in the bounty. I love that.

Your poem follows an aabb pattern and holds through each of the stanzas. Only one stanza - the last broke from this pattern. By then the story was nearing its close so it was not something to disrupt the read.

Thank you for sharing this piece. I do hope you continue to write and share your work. I see this is written in 2010... that is the beauty of the randomness of read and review - it picks up stuff and puts it out there - reminding the readers of the wonderful writing here at WDC, but also reminding the writers of the wonderful work they have shared over the years.

Have an awesome weekend.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .