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Holiday C-Notes  [ASR]
Christmas, Hanukkah, New Year, Fun C-Notes
by Gaby ~ Way behind!
Review of Holiday C-Notes  
Review by Jayne
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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This is a "Game of Thrones"  review!



Hello, Gaby ~ Way behind! !

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
What a great collection of holiday/winter C-notes! If you're looking for notes during the colder months, there's a little something for everyone in here.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
The title indicates it's holiday c-notes, but you've snuck a few in there that are more winter-themed without necessarily being Christmas-y. I only point this out because the "I'm so freaking cold" card caught my eye. It's definitely something I'd consider sending!

You mention in the description that the C-notes aren't just for Christmas; instead of 'fun,' you could opt for 'winter' to better explain it. I'm unsure if there's a solution to the problem that probably doesn't exist anywhere except in my head.

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
Your shop page is so refreshing—a beautiful, eye-catching graphic with the least words necessary to get the point across. I appreciate your use of the dropnote to highlight your other storefronts. It reduces the visual clutter and prevents me from scrolling endlessly until I get to what I was looking for.

As for the C-notes themselves, obviously, "I'm so freaking cold" is my favorite, but there's plenty to like, especially the ones with a watercolor feel to them. They're a little whimsical but still classy. And the sayings on some of these are hysterical! The only card I struggled with was "wonderful time." The light blue writing on the light blue background makes it difficult to read (on my computer screen, anyway). It's more obvious when you compare it to "All the Best," which has red on white and is much easier to read.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I didn't find any problems with the shop or the c-notes.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
I hope your C-note shops are doing well. You've put in a lot of effort, and it shows!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayne *Smile*


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