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A Review From The Bank Of Braavos

Hi Debmiller. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: A Sudanese Century Plant's Dream

First Impression: I see this short story involved a plant. A Man believing a plant has a bond with him and vice versa I thought this sounds interesting and I want to read more. This looked interesting so I am here reviewing this.

What needs your attention: A man being separated from his wife and kids for years. Seems like there should have been an answer. The plant dying. The man thinking his dreams died, too. I guess I don't think that way.

What part I liked best: The man learned American. Went to an American College. Things were looking up. Baseball fans cheered the man on to be a US Citizen.

Overall Impression: Well rounded characters and looks like you put some thought into this. He did act like the plant was some sort of crystal ball. He decides it is time to go get his family to be with him. Priceless. Creative and maybe the plant did have magic. This holds the reader's interest and has a good style. Some interesting character names. I admired the main character for his progress. I enjoyed reading this. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reviewer and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to author to consider this review as a corrective issue or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. It has been my pleasure.