Hi Robert,

Congratulations on your Account Anniversary next month. This is a "Game of Thrones"  review and I am sending it to in honor of your Anniversary.

Positives:

I thought this story was well written. It captured my attention from the beginning and held it to the ending. The ending, I add, was a complete surprise to me. I thought the POV was well done and well balanced with the dialogue. The setting descriptions were very vivid and work very well with time place, and other setting characteristics.

I felt the characters were well developed and believable and your word choice and sentence structure very good. The dialogue was believable and flowed smoothly.

Grammer/Spelling/Punctuation: I saw no issues with Grammer/Spelling or Punction.

I enjoyed the technique of not identifying the where abouts of the book except through the possibilities thought by the author, and I felt it was most effective.

What I liked best were the two librarians, Helen and Slyvia.
I thought your descriptions were very good. They reminded me of the two librarians I have dealings here in my hometown.

Suggestions:
I cannot offer any suggestions for improvement because I feel the piece does not warrant any. Again I thought it was well written.
Kristina

The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not necessarily reflect the group, activity, and/or events affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.




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