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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi JaysandzI am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: A Letter To My Brother

First Impression: A letter to a family member. My sister and I Met late in life and got to know each other through letters. I was drawn to this and wanted to read this. I was an only child and I am always curious about people and their siblings.

What needs your attention: You have to read this and you realize the brother die. I was thinking you could say it at the top of the letter before you start writing it but you read it and then you get it.

What part I liked best: The words were heartfelt. You ask God why and you told your brother how you feel. I like to think our deceased relatives know we care and if we write a letter, they can read it from where they are now. You told your brother you are grateful. This made me smile.

Overall Impression: The rhyme pattern rounds this out. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and the words were chosen well. This drew the reader in. I lost my father a few months back, so I get this. I enjoyed reading this.

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