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How is it that

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poem i wrote when i couldn't sleep because i kept thinking about this girl
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Review of How is it that

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Rated: E

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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "How is it that"

from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"

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THE POEM

The poem ponders the question "how is it that" I can't forget about you?

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the honest introspection the poem offers. Even when 2 years have passed, the author can remember her with such clarity it's unnerving. I had something similar happen to me and I would consider this man my "first" that I was in love with. Even now, there are times I think "how is it that...?"

STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme. The poem reads more like a prose as there are full sentences.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. If anything, I suggest using WDC ML to increase the font so as to make it easier on the eyes for the WDC reader.

DESCRIPTIONS

There's no vivid descriptions - just everyday descriptions. One that sticks out to me is it's been two long years.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I thought the title matched the thoughts and sentiments of the poem well and evoked the reader to ponder the "what if" in their own lives. That's how the poem emotionally resonates with the reader. The poem is easy to read and understand.