Hi KURT -

This is a "Game of Thrones"  review.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. this is only the opinions and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

The reason I chose this particular story/poem: A sports satire, how could anyone resist?

My opinion of said story/poem: A man, who seems to come from a long line of miscreants, alcoholic miscreants at that, gives in to the urge to run onto the game field. One would think there would not be much to say about this time-worn subject, but the author managed to bring it relevancy, all while making you want to cheer on the drunken lawbreaker.

All of the characters, including the fans, behave in a believable manner. There is no dialogue, but that does not take away from the story in any way.

There is not much being said about the players themselves, but there is a lot of railing against the establishment. This is all done in a manner that coincides with the lawbreaker's frame of mind that adds a touch of realism.

Conclusion: You may want to incorporate the idea of putting a space between paragraphs to make computer reading easier. And, for some of us that have been looking at computer screens for way too many years, a bigger font would be nice.

The piece is written well with a lot of imagery that keeps the story moving. I enjoyed the story even though I'm of the opinion the troublemaker should have gotten his due.

Thank you for the lively entertainment.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina




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