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Hi Joy review 2 of 2

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Pacing

First Impression: This is great advice and definitely something I need to improve at. I love the idea of red and blue pencils to see visually the movement. Would it work with poetry as well?

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything but as you kow punctuation and grammar are not my strengths.

What part I liked best: I enjoyed the read but even more so a great pacing exercise so I can apply it to my own writing. I definitely need the practice and if Gaby has anything to do with it... I'll be getting a lot of it. I like the idea of applying it to already written work so I won't be focusing on just the pacing and losing ground on other important parts of the story like the characters, setting and the challenge of overcoming passive voice.

Overall impression: This was educational and all new writers should practice the pacing exercise. I won't name any author in particular but there are quite a few besides me that need the practice. Just saying. You know I can be a stinker. Thank you for giving me another tool to improve my writing.

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