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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Happy WDC Anniversary!

Hi Bluedragonfly

My name is Megan. I am one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I like gnomes so this caught my attention. A gnome decides to run away. He comes to life and says he is out of here. I was curious to read about this little guy so I decided this is the story for me. I sat back and thought this will be cute and entertaining.

What needs your attention: Why didn't the gnome do any damage to the yard before he left? Did anyone see him? Like a dog that might chase him? I just think the gnome could have done something to the yard before he left but I guess he just wanted to leave.

What part I liked best: The gnome caught a ride on a remote control jeep and snuck into a store and took gummy frogs, crackers and soda. I do enjoy how he escaped out of the yard. He sees people and is curious. His name is Harold and he is a booking. Some good action.

Overall Impression: The gnome came to life and he was tired of being a gnome. This is cute and entertaining. This gnome is smart. A good style and well rounded character and I wonder where he ended up at. A new home in the country by a cottage? Easy to follow and creative as well as entertaining. A fun read as well as a fun write I am sure.



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