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 | Ego vs Nature  [E] Poem for EXPRESS IT IN EIGHT  |
| (4.5)| Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Greetings catdok !I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . Today is your Account Anniversary and I'm so glad you've stayed with us here for a decade. Here's to more years of Writing and Reviewing! HAPPY ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY! To celebrate your anniversary, here's a review for you. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents: Theme and Structure Central Conflict: The poem explores the eternal conflict between ego and nature. Ego represents self-centeredness, the drive to dominate, and a belief in its own invincibility. Nature here stands for the humbling power of natural forces, the inevitability of change, and the cyclical nature of life. Dialogue: The poem is structured as a short, sharp dialogue, which helps dramatize the clashing viewpoints. Poetic Devices Personification: Both Ego and Nature are personified, giving them voices and creating a sense of tension and direct confrontation. Repetition: The repetition of phrases like "I know," "I'll," and "I shall" emphasizes the Ego's inflated sense of self and determination, while the consistent responses from Nature act as a counterpoint. Imagery: The poem uses simple but effective imagery such as a boat, the top of a mountain (scores), and the dinosaurs to create a sense of the Ego's ambition and Nature's timeless power. Analysis Arrogance vs. Wisdom: The poem portrays the Ego as boastful, short-sighted, and ultimately deluded. It believes itself to be the master of its destiny, refusing to see the limitations the world places on it. Nature, on the other hand, embodies the wisdom of time and the recognition that even the most powerful forces will eventually fade. Humility: The poem implicitly suggests the importance of humility. Nature's reference to the dinosaurs is particularly potent, reminding us that even seemingly unstoppable powers can be extinguished. Open Ending: The ending is unresolved. Will Ego learn its lesson? Does it "flop" and learn humility, or will its arrogance persist? This open ending invites the reader to contemplate the consequences of unchecked ego. Limitations Brevity: While effective for its purpose, the poem's short length limits its ability to fully delve into the complexities of ego and nature. There's room to add more nuance and further exploration of the consequences of this conflict. Simplicity of Language: The language is quite simple, which may make it appealing to younger readers but perhaps lacks the richness that could invite deeper analysis from an older audience. Overall The poem "Ego Versus Nature" works well as a simple yet evocative depiction of a universal conflict. Its use of dialogue and imagery make it engaging and accessible. It may be seen as a fable or cautionary tale, prompting the reader to reflect on their own ego and the powerful forces of the natural world. Best regards, Gervic    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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