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Review #4740928
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Musings... Open in new Window. [18+]
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Uncertainty" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Gaby Author IconMail Icon, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating Author IconMail Icon, I am reviewing "Musings..." Open in new Window. "Uncertainty" Open in new Window., because I discovered it on the "I Write in 2024" Open in new Window. forum page.

First Impression: The paragraph written for the contest got my attention and made want to know more about what happened to the woman.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the hook was description of the wind. I like that part because it showed a strong wind rather then just telling about i t.

Final thoughts: Good luck on the contest.

Write on!


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