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| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Invalid Item" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMA divine look at nature from it's simplest, humblest vantage point, to the deep pondering mystery of what nature offers the soul.  WHAT I LIKEDThe poem challenges a reader's critical thinking - giving them the opportunity to see the physical nature nature around them, then challenges the reader to go deeper - what or who brings us the beauty of nature that soothes the soul?  STRUCTUREThis is a free form poem with no set rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. I might suggest using WDC ML to make the font bigger so it is easier to read on WDC. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Among the stars, a trailing beck," I can close my eyes and visualize a blazing trail of fire, like a comet, visiting each star. SETTINGI could picture myself standing on the roof of a tall building and looking out into the night pondering the world around me. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSSuggestion as mentioned above. The poem invites a visual full of nature, yet taps into the power of the spiritual to make a poignant connection to the reader. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  
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