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 | The Symphony of Life  [E] Each and everyone of us has a role to play in the Symphony of Life.  |
| (5.0)| Hallo Emerick - The Preacher ! I will be reviewing your work "The Symphony of Life" on behalf of "House Targaryen Points" for "Game of Thrones"  Content: This is a poem of self-reflection; one that ought to make the reader contemplate their existence within the tapestry that is Life. The poem emphasis on what makes this earth so unique and special, and allows the reader to feel that he or she is a part of its beauty. It gives feelings of self-empowerment; and for one to believe in themeselves. So, yes, this is a poem for one to read should they need revalidation of their importance. Pluses:Do you sing? Or write lyrics? Because this almost read like a song. Not to sound like I'm overpraising you, but there really is a beauty to the rhythm and rhyme of this piece. Let's not even talk about the subject matter itself. You start off with the mysteries that surround this world we live in. Why are things the way they are? What makes the sky its hue of blue or how are the leaves so vibrant with color? In the second stanza, the line: And fingers, each unique, with stories to speak. - is excellent. It really makes you think, doesn't it? That our fingers and hands have touched so many things in our lifetime and the stories they could tell...endless. In the third stanza, you ask us to be more self-reflective; to figure out just what we could be running away from - if at all? Perhaps we are afraid of revealing things that would make us more vulnerable. Or we are not willing to be more open with others at all. In the fourth stanza, you ask us to embrace our flaws; that no matter what religion you affiliate with, you were created as something special. That we are masterpieces in our own right. In the fifth, you encourage us to embrace those flaws and imperfections; that those are the very things that make us unique and different from everyone else. Being perfect is so boring after all, isn't it? You have to try to take pride in who you are even if nobody else will. You finish it off with a lovely stanza that starts off with: For in the tapestry of existence, you are a thread, I can appreciate the imagery there. It does leave one with hope and feeling so much better about themselves. Suggestions:I struggle to find anything to suggest; the poem is very well-written.    Thanks so very much for sharing this piece with us, and the best of luck with your future writing endeavors.    Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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