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 Exclusive Merit Badges From Richard  [E]
These are the four Merit Badges available
by Richard ~ Less Mummy Like!
Review by Polter-JACE
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hi Richard ~ Less Mummy Like! .

I'm Polter-JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Exclusive Merit Badges From Richard" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I was very surprised to have this item pop up on the Read & Review feature. I mean you fostered more questions than answered.

What are you trying to say ... beyond the obvious that you have commissioned several merit badges? Are they made specifically for you to give? How can one obtain a particular MB? Does one have to join a group, or complete a specific task to receive one?

I clicked on each badge thinking it might link to a group or provide the aforementioned information. They just opened a window of the SMs acknowledging her passing them to you.

I could guess at the reasons for your first two badges listed. But I'm hard-pressed to discern a reason to give the latter two badges. And the more I write, the more interested in knowing I become.

My overriding question: Why did you post these four badges in a Static Item?

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* Obviously, there's nothing to add for this section.   

*Thumbsup* Favorite Part.

 Of the four badges, the Needs More Cowbell intrigues me the most. Meaning???

*Star* My Rating.  3.0.  Without any information on which to base a calculated rating decision, I have to pass this as Average.

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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