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 A Moral Objective: A Vacant Tomorrow  [E]
Living a lucid theory of existence - a spirit of gloom - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's very thoughtful poetry about our moral objectives. We should always be going towards a bright and prosperous future. Our desires demand so. But, we opt for the wrong path. The poet tries to show us the same through this. The valuable times passed away. Our target becomes tougher with every ongoing moment. But, it is not possible to achieve our dreams though not an easy task. We should attempt wholeheartedly. Hope, the result must be positive.
Now, our time demands these sorts of inspirations.
To the improvement of our society, this type of dedication is needed.
Write on!


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