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#1565040 by Annette


Yes, I can totally relate to this one. My aunt found Mom's old fountain pen and gave it to me and I'm really enjoying using it!

You bring out something most of us from the pre-electronics generation can relate to - the solid FEEL of an object that we held, and everything that meant to us. What a whiff of nostalgia from your poem!

A special shout-out for the easy to read layout.

Favourite part - the play on the word 'point'.

Question - What does it mean when you say 'Technology is expected'?

In your notes, you've said '12 lines', is that a typo?

Happy WDC Anniversary!
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- Sonali

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