What an intriguing piece! A completely new way of describing what would otherwise have been an ordinary scene, highlighting each element and tacitly reflecting someone's personality.
I read it twice to make sure I hadn't missed anything! I'm still not sure, though.
The title and brief description work. The opening sentence confused me a bit. Eight minutes BEFORE it came into the room, or eight minutes within the room?
The note at the conclusion helped understand the context.
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