The speaker and Danika is searching for evidence among files for something that would prove Carlson Roberts hasn't got a leg to stand on. Then the speaker started looking at the schedule and noticed something off. The time was 2 hours apart from each other. Good catch. Usually the babysitter would come right when they are needed, not beforehand. So that would've given time for the leg to be put on.

Great details. The evidence was right there when they needed it. It just took a little bit of prodding to do. The voice sounded natural. They might even be a little bored of going through all of that paperwork, yet it needed to be done. But a little bit more searching to do through the schedule and the evidence appeared. No spelling or grammar errors found.

Could put some more details on how the speaker felt as they spoke. It doesn't have to be very much. Just a sentence or two here and there throughout the conversation will work. Also, I think the story flows smoothly as is and is tight. There is no rough spots along the way. Good job and keep up the good work!

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