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A short item about how you tried to start/run a café/library filled with rare books. However, some older man came in, and believed that you were too young to be in charge. Sadly, there's always going to be some critic that believes that younger folks can't be in charge.

Personally, in that case, I would of hired a retired librarian, or grandmotherly/grandfatherly sort to act as a decoy manager - although, having them be an actual manager with a few younger servers/librarians doing tasks would help sell the illusion.

Characters and Thoughts
Well, things look interesting. Sorry you closed you café/library.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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