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 Summer in Sabetha  [E]
This is based on a very beautiful summer in Sabetha, Kansas ... a long time ago.
by ผีKåreEngaในMontana
Review of Summer in Sabetha  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi ผีKåreEngaในMontana .

I'm Polter-JACE: Cruising ... , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Summer in Sabetha" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. You write of a memory with a twinge of regret. Who of us haven't such a memory from out own past? If only....

And yet, we make our choices, whether out of fear, or through careful consideration. Now we live with memories of what might have been.

Mine is of a young lady met at college orientation, but never pursued upon beginning that first semester. I explained it away as being too busy. I wasn't really; just too shy.

Thank you for sharing.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet*  I appreciate your explanation at the end.    

         *Bullet*  No problems to note here.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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JACE

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